There are many poems to choose from. If you had the time,
I would suggest The Rime of the Ancient Mariner by Samuel Taylor
Coleridge. It is an epic, supernatural poem, with many literary and poetic devices. You
might, however, want something shorter for now.
Look at
Edgar Allan Poe's poem, "Annabel Lee."
For imagery, see the
line about the wind blowing out of the sea (third stanza), as well as the image at the
end of the poem: at the night-tide, he lies down next to her, where she lies in her
sepulcher (last stanza).
In terms of sound devices, it is
what I love about this poem: it was truly meant to be read aloud. Although we often
think of Poe as the king of the horror and suspense, he is an great poet as well.
"Annabel Lee" is simple, but it has a real musical quality. For sound
devices, I would look for assonance,
consonance, and/or
alliteration.
Assonance
is in the line "I lie down by the side." Note that not all the letters are the same, but
the SOUNDS are, and that is what is
important in "sound devices." You can hear the long "i" sound in "lie," "by" and "side."
This works because the "y" has the long "i" sound (this is found in the last stanza).
Consonance is in the line "never dissever," with the "r" sounds at
the end of the words (fifth stanza).
In terms of poetic
devices, there are several Poe uses. This is not the most sophisticated poem he has
written, but it is a fine place to begin. (By the way, many websites and textbooks—and I
think accurately so—list sound devices and poetic devices as the same things, especially
with assonance, consonance and alliteration.) The first poetic device I notice is the
dramatic rhyme. This is how you know the poem should be read aloud. Its musical quality
comes out with the sound devices, then in the poetic
devices.
For instance, look at the rhyming pattern, found
in the last word of each line in the first stanza. When we scan a rhyme scheme, we
assign a different letter to each new sound. ("Near rhyme" is when words are used that
sound very similar, e.g., "came" and "again. It is not true rhyme,
but poets use this device. Poe doesn't choose to.)
The
rhyme scheme of the first stanza is: A B A B C B. In other words, the words "ago" and
"know" rhyme. We assign an "A" to the long "o" sound. For the second, fourth and sixth
lines, we hear rhyme in the words "sea," "Lee," and "me." This second sound (assigned in
the order the next sound is used") is given a "B." The only line that does
not have an end rhyme that follows this pattern is line five.
"Thought" does not rhyme with anything, so we assign it a
"C."
The second stanza also has end rhyme, but the pattern
is different. It takes up after the rhyme scheme of the first stanza. It is D B E B F B.
The "B" sound is the repetition of the long "e" sound found in "sea," "Lee," and "me,"
while D E and F intorduce new sounds.
Now that we have
covered end rhyme, we can move on to repetition. There is a lot of it here. Line one
uses "many" and "many." "Annabel Lee" is used repeatedly, as is "sea." Repetition is
used in the word "love":
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But we loved with a
love that was more than
love
Also
repeated is some form of:
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In this kingdom by the
sea.
Repetition can also be
used when the structure of a phrase is
repeated:
She
was a child and I was a
child,
You might also be able
to use the word "blew" as a form of onomatopoeia that mimics the sound of the
wind:
A wind
blew out of a cloud by
night...
Hope this
is of some
help!
NOTE: you
could also use "The Raven." Great for devices!