The boy walked through the
woods.
Ornate style asks that you elevate the diction
(vocabulary) and syntax(structure) of the sentence to a higher level. Think of a
regular, undecorated wall, and then, compare it to the same wall with paint, pictures
and other decorations.
So, what can we do to elevate this
sentence? Let's start with the nouns - boy and
woods.
- First, think of some synonyms for boy:
adolescent, juvenile, youth, college senior, high school freshman, middle school
shortstop...the list is endless. - Second, add some
description: the snarling adolescent with the metal adornments on his face. We added
snarling and the fact that he had facial
piercings. - Repeat this process for the noun
'woods' - Third, look at your verb - walked. Repeat the
process we began above with this word.
No
matter what the original sentence, you can always create an ornate style. If you would
like to learn more about ornate style, check out the links attached which will take you
to some modern authors who write in an ornate style.
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