In order to write a persuasive essay, you need to come up
with a few arguments in favor of your point. Here are some potential arguments for this
idea:
- It makes the children feel equally loved
by both parents. It is not that fun for a kid to grow up thinking, for example, that
mom cares enough to spend time with them but dad does not. If both parents have equal
responsibility, it makes the child feel that both parents
care. - It allows the child to benefit from both parents'
strengths. Parents are often strong in different ways. If only one raises the child,
the child will miss out on learning from the other
parent. - It makes both parents more involved and
strengthens the family overall. If both parents are involved, everyone in the family
feels closer to one another. This is good for the children and for the
parents.
To write your essay, expand on these
ideas and/or inject ideas of your own.
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